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English 9 / Unit 8: Writing Essays

8.4 Introductions and Conclusions

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Notes

The introduction draws readers in; the conclusion leaves them with a lasting thought.

  • Introduction: hook (question, surprising fact, short anecdote, vivid image), background (context), thesis.
  • Avoid weak hooks like dictionary definitions or "Since the beginning of time."
  • Conclusion: restate the thesis in new words, briefly sum up key points, end with significance ("so what?"), a call to action or a final insight.
  • Do not add brand-new evidence in the conclusion.
  • Example hook: "Every year, the average American throws away about 80 pounds of clothing."

Practice

Which is the most engaging hook for an essay about ocean plastic?
Which should NOT appear in a conclusion?
What comes between the hook and the thesis in an introduction?

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