Notes
Revealing character
- Direct characterization states traits; indirect characterization shows them through STEAL: speech, thoughts, effect on others, actions, looks.
- Motivation is why a character acts; it can be internal (fear, pride) or external (money, threats).
Character types
- Protagonist vs. antagonist (a person or a force).
- Round (complex) vs. flat (simple); dynamic (changes) vs. static (stays the same).
- A foil contrasts with another character to highlight traits.
Point of view
- First person ("I"), second person ("you"), third limited (one mind), third omniscient (all minds), third objective (no minds).
- POV controls what readers know, building closeness, suspense or dramatic irony.
- An unreliable narrator may be biased, mistaken or lying.
Dialogue and voice
- Dialogue reveals traits and conflict. Word choice, slang and dialect create voice.
Topics in this unit
Each topic has its own short notes and practice.
Practice
Inviting a lonely newcomer shows kindness (indirect characterization through action).
A static character does not change.
The narrator reveals both the daughter's hopes and the mother's private decision.
Contradictions show the narrator cannot be trusted.
A foil highlights another character through contrast.
First person keeps readers inside one frightened mind.
Free response
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Free-response question
Read the passage: "Ethan always arrived first and left last. When the team lost, he restacked the cones alone, muttering, 'We'll get them next time.' The younger players copied the way he tied his cleats. Still, when the coach named him captain, Ethan stared at his shoes and said, 'Are you sure it shouldn't be someone else?'"
(a) Identify two traits of Ethan and the STEAL method that reveals each.
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Ethan is hardworking, shown by his actions (arriving first, restacking cones alone). He is a role model, shown by his effect on others (younger players copy him). He is also modest, shown by his speech when he questions being named captain.
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(b) Is the passage written with direct or indirect characterization? Explain.
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Indirect. The narrator never states "Ethan was hardworking"; readers infer his traits from actions, speech and others' reactions.
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(c) Identify the point of view and explain one effect it has.
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Third person objective (or limited from outside): the narrator uses "he" and reports only what can be seen and heard, never Ethan's thoughts. Because his thoughts are hidden, readers must infer his feelings, such as his self-doubt, from his words and body language.
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